Friday, 28 September 2018

Poem 2018 Term 3


This poem was really enjoyable and it was good !

Looks like the long beautiful greenland.
Smells like fresh air.
Tastes like a fine chunky piece of Kereru.
Feels like hard dirty ground.
Lives in Zealandia.
By Hohepa

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1 comment:

  1. Matawai Blog Admin11 October 2018 at 15:09

    Kia Ora Hohepa,
    I really liked the way you used adjectives in your poem.
    Are you going to visit places like this in Wellington in term 4?
    Mā te wā
    Mrs Torrie

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